I'm so glad to see this fic back! I had to re-read it all to refresh myself, and I had forgotten how crazy Tim was in this! Holy shit, that boy takes stalking to a whole new level!
You continue to do a wonderful job twisting canon through this filter. It's fascinating to read, and often carries a feeling of foreboding (especially where Timmy is concerned). The mood and pacing in this is excellent and really builds up the tension. And I love the way you delve into the characters and their actions, as you really bring to light some emotionally-rich feelings.
Fantastic job! Like I said, I'm so glad this is back! And I'm looking forward to seeing just where it goes next!
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Date: 2013-03-07 03:58 am (UTC)You continue to do a wonderful job twisting canon through this filter. It's fascinating to read, and often carries a feeling of foreboding (especially where Timmy is concerned). The mood and pacing in this is excellent and really builds up the tension. And I love the way you delve into the characters and their actions, as you really bring to light some emotionally-rich feelings.
Fantastic job! Like I said, I'm so glad this is back! And I'm looking forward to seeing just where it goes next!